The Running of the Brides?
Filed under: Editor at Large — Casey

or How to Tell When You Really Need an Editor, Part II:

XYZ Hotel & Spa presents an elegant bridal open house that offers you a rare opportunity to tour our one-of-a-kind banquet rooms and the world famous St. Francis Chapel in full wedding attire.

A special event for those brides who aren’t sure whether their gowns will fit through the door.

3 Comments »

  • Kenneth said:  
    (On 24 September 2008 at 12:31 PM)

    The inability of the Mission Inn to speak/write the King’s English notwithstanding, the hotel is a beautiful old style hotel that would make for a wonderful wedding site; wide wedding attire or not. But it is amazing how many people who write ad copy really do need some serious editing help.

  • Casey said:  
    (On 24 September 2008 at 12:32 PM)

    I’m glad you can see the humor in it! It is certainly a beautiful hotel.

  • nba 2k16 mt glitch xbox one said:  
    (On 16 April 2016 at 6:56 AM)

    Unbelievably user friendly site. Immense details offered on few clicks on.|

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