Editor at Large

The Running of the Brides?

or How to Tell When You Really Need an Editor, Part II:

XYZ Hotel & Spa presents an elegant bridal open house that offers you a rare opportunity to tour our one-of-a-kind banquet rooms and the world famous St. Francis Chapel in full wedding attire.

A special event for those brides who aren’t sure whether their gowns will fit through the door.

2 replies on “The Running of the Brides?”

The inability of the Mission Inn to speak/write the King’s English notwithstanding, the hotel is a beautiful old style hotel that would make for a wonderful wedding site; wide wedding attire or not. But it is amazing how many people who write ad copy really do need some serious editing help.

I’m glad you can see the humor in it! It is certainly a beautiful hotel.

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